This is my second new review of a full read for the Peripheral Prospectors judging team for the final round of SPSFC#4. For more information about the team and our progress, please go to the team update page here.
The book is Bisection by Sheila Jenné. The book is available from many retailers.
Blurb
Tria and Resa have shared the same body since they were born. Like everyone on their home planet of Kinaru, their mind and body are divided down the middle: the logical right and the emotional left. Tria, the right, has a budding career as a biologist, while Resa dreams of more freedom than their home planet grants her.
When aliens land on Kinaru, Tria and Resa seize the opportunity to be the first of their people to travel to the stars. Karnath, the alien scientist assigned to study them, is convinced there is more to the Kinaru than meets the eye. But only days into the trip, crew members start turning up dead, and a mutiny redirects the ship toward a forbidden, war-torn planet—Earth.
To solve a conspiracy that threatens three planets, Tria must find out the truth of who her people really are, and Resa needs to finally tell Tria the dark secrets she’s been hiding all their lives.
My Review
I quite enjoyed my time with this book. It’s a space opera at heart, but it has some of the big concept what-if pieces central to, say, a classic Star Trek episode, where there’s an alien race who’s like us but different in one or two key ways. There are actually two such races here, and we get to explore both. Where I felt the book really shined was with the unique nature of the Kinaru species, brought to wonderful and touching life by the main character.
Plot and Characters
The book has an ongoing plot that alternates between first-contact, mystery, and thriller, but the real heart of the book are the central characters, Tria il Resa, who are two personalities who share a single body, with Tria being logical, coldly analytical, and a bit aloof, while Resa is emotional, artistic, impulsive, and romantic. It’s a little like if Kirk and Spock were forced to inhabit the same body, except that these two have always been together and are mutually respectful, caring friends.
Most of the first-person narrative is from Tria, who is accustomed to running things, as is tradition on Kinaru. The “rights” – the right-brained analytical types – are dominant over the “lefts,” who have a history of being subjugated, although it is a weird sort of beloved subjugation. We do get some chapters from Resa’s perspective, too, and it’s a real joy to see their different mindsets, motivations, and thought processes. This is the coolest part of the book – an awesome high-concept foundation, where it almost doesn’t matter what storyline you put on top of it – it’s going to be interesting to explore.
There is a storyline, though, and it crosses the galaxy to bring about conflict, betrayal, discovery, action, and even a little romance. Tria and Resa boldly stow away aboard an alien ship visiting their world, Kinaru, and after some initial consternation, they are adopted as guests of a scientific exploration ship sent to their world by the Shatakazans. The Kinaru are highly advanced socially, but they are probably somewhere near early 20th-century Earth levels of technology, so the advanced tech and space travel of the Shatakazans is something very new to Tria and Resa. The Shatakazans are reptillian and have a number of significant biological and social differences to humans, but they breathe the same air and act a lot like humans in a lot of ways, particularly personality-wise and with their wants and desires all feeling pretty human. Each Shatakazan chooses a faction tied to a philosophy, which is a neat concept to explore. Their planet is nominally democratic, or at least parliamentary, but it is more like a one-party democracy as existed in Mexico and Japan for many years, with minor factions not having much power.
We meet a bunch of Shatakazans, but the one who’s most developed is Karnath, a scientist and free soul. I had a little trouble keeping the rest of them straight, as they are numerous and have weird names, but that’s probably a me thing. To avoid spoilers, I’ll probably leave it there, but suffice it to say, there are a bunch of adventures Tria and Resa and their lizard buddies go on as the book winds its way to its conclusion, and we learn a lot more about their two societies as we go.
My Thoughts
It’s clear why this book is a finalist. It’s well-written and engaging, with some great big sci-fi concepts to explore, which it does in interesting and entertaining ways. The two-people-in-one-body concept is done really, really well. I was reminded a little bit of Heinlein’s I Will Fear No Evil, in which an old man and a young woman share a body, but this book has more to say, and the split between right-brain and left-brain identities, with the social structures that bifurcation forces on Kinaru society, makes it all the more powerful. This elevates this over some of the other books I’ve read for the competition which were simpler space adventures (although some of these are admittedly great space adventures). Bisection is thinky, in a good way, which is really great.
Where the book was a little weaker for me was in the nuts and bolts of the plot. A lot of it was admirably solid and well crafted, but there were a number of head-scratcher moments for me. Many of these surrounded plans, either by the protagonists or their enemies. These plans (both major and minor) often seemed very half-baked, where I felt like real people with the information they had might have chosen better strategies, or where the strategies they chose could well have been completely unworkable. In these moments, the people in the story became less real to me. In some cases, these questionable plans just work because the plot needs them to. In other cases, the questionable plans fail in completely predictable ways. As a repeated example, nobody in this book is any good at all at holding onto prisoners. Like, zero good jailers here. Major failures of basic jailing. There’s also a bad-guy plan at the heart of the adventure plot that is something that seems both ill-fated and poorly conceived, and yet it functions far better than it seems like it should, with the help of a local government acting in in a way I thought was not at all how it would act (or could act) in the situation presented.
There are a couple other minor bits that itched at me while I read. There’s a huge, huge mysterious coincidence the characters discover early on which cannot be anything but deliberate and engineered, but the explanations they float for how it could be (a weird intersystem comet, mostly) are not something serious scientists would entertain, or at least not phrase that way. Another thing that bugged me a little was the communication. Like Star Trek, there’s some universal translation going on here, but once it’s established, it’s basically perfect and almost never commented on, even when I wondered how certain parties would have gotten one of the translators. Of course, Star Trek does this shamelessly, even having the latex lips of the aliens form English words, so it’s not a big deal, and it would make any space opera a lot harder to read. Finally, there’s at one point a pretty major revelation which felt a little like a Greek god interfering in the mortal realm. For me, this took a good bit of agency away from the main characters, but it’s explained pretty well and leads to a few of the book’s absolute best moments, one of them completely, gloriously unexpected, so it’s forgiven.
All of these are minor nitpicks and easily ignored. The story is really about what happens when a race of people has one key difference from our own society, and the beauty of the book is how that plays out in their lives, their relationships, their culture, and their thoughts. The dawning realization of Tria that she has fundamentally misunderstood Resa, her closest friend, and in fact fundamentally misunderstood personhood, society, and basic humanity, is A-plus, gold-medal stuff, written beautifully. I loved it, and while I wished there was a little more of that and a little less of the action plot, I’ll happily take what I was given, and what Jenné chose to write.
Summation
If you’re up for a big-concept sci-fi story, hearkening back to those big concepts that Theodore Sturgeon and Philip K. Dick explored in sci-fi’s classical heyday, Bisection delivers. The beautiful, evolving, respectful conflict between the two main characters, one out of place in the galaxy, one out of place in her own society and her own body, is great, great stuff.
