This is my last review of a full read for the Peripheral Prospectors judging team for the final round of SPSFC#4. For more information about the team and our progress, please go to the team update page here.
The book is Accidental Intelligence by Bryan Chaffin. The book is available from many retailers.
With this review, I’ve now reviewed five of the six finalists. Here are the other four reviews.
The sixth finalist, Whiskey and Warfare, I will review in the coming weeks. It was named as a semifinalist from our judging group back in March and made it to the finals. I missed reading it back then because we divided our allocation among our team members. That meant that once it was named a semifinalist, our team’s rating for it was fixed, and I couldn’t add a score to it. So, I focused on the semifinalists and finalists where my reviews would count in the competition. But, I want to read it – I hear it’s cool! – and now I am done with the other SPSFC reviewing and have some time. There are a couple books from our quarterfinals I also want to get to now, especially Afterburn by D. Andrews.
Blurb
Private detective Mason Truman is being yanked around by invisible strings, and it’s an AI doing the yanking. Miranda. She’s subtle. Crazy. And she thinks she can see the future. It’s enough to drive Mason nuts. Miranda believes her fellow AIs are up to some kind of grand conspiracy against the Terran Republic, and she wants Mason’s help proving it. Conspiracies are above Mason’s pay grade, though, the kind of time-sink that can put a crimp in more serious pursuits. Like drinking coffee. And staying alive.
But Miranda won’t take no for an answer. Mason can help or Miranda will make sure he becomes intimately acquainted with the finer conversational techniques of the secret police. So Mason digs until he uncovers a cache of stolen communications between a cabal of rogue AIs. They’re planning what they call Eschaton—the divinely ordained end of humanity. Unless Mason and Miranda stop the arrogant pricks, the conspirators will destroy Earth.
Mason and Miranda have one chance, a way of bottling up the rogue AIs. All Mason has to do is lure the conspirators to the right spot in a sim world. That’s how Mason learns that when Miranda said she needed help, what she meant was bait.
My Review
I quite enjoyed my time with this book. To me, it was reminiscent of cyberpunk books like William Gibson’s Neuromancer that I read back in college, with a richly imagined near-future world, in this case the mid-2100’s, extrapolated from what’s going on in our world today, and with a sometimes dizzying array of concepts, terminology, subcultures, and tech. The world Chaffin builds here is fascinating, dystopian, and complex, and it will be interesting to see (as it was with William Gibson) how prescient he is about our actual future.
Plot and Characters
The book meshes a bunch of tropes in fun an interesting ways. The main character, Mason Truman, is an old-school private eye who wouldn’t be out of place in a 1930’s noir setting. The world he lives in is filled with technology, some of it really useful, like food generators, robotic doctors, and factotums – smart, connected electronic assistants, kind of like what Apple and Amazon wish Siri and Alexa could be. The fascist-flavored society, which now spans a number of worlds and colonies within the solar system, is governed by an uneasy alliance of human plutocrats and AI personalities. Each of the AIs originated as non-sentient software designed for a purpose and then gained sentience on its own, but they’re now blocking any effort that might lead to more AIs being born. There’s a military also, but it’s largely a pawn of the two major political forces. There’s a rich online virtual reality, the Omninet, which includes games, sims, tourism, socializing, and porn.
Mason is a fun character to follow, with a strong personality, a big mouth, and a fun relationship with his factotum, Sam. He’s got some friends and family who pop in from time to time and help him, and he befriends (fairly involuntarily) a kind of psychic outsider AI, Miranda, that the some of other AIs (a little rebel group) have created as a kind of experiment in reproduction and design. There’s an uberhacker named Peanut, a malicious ex-fiancé, and a military hero cousin who all also get involved.
What starts as a routine missing persons case become ever more complex, and the stakes get higher and higher, and the pace more frenetic, but I’ll leave off talking about plot to avoid spoilers.
My Thoughts
It’s clear why this book is a finalist. The world Chaffin has created has tons of detail, and it’s mostly introduced to us through action and dialogue, not through big info dumps, although sometimes Mason goes off on a topic in his head. That focus on the story is refreshing, although as a reader, you have to be on top of your game to take it all in and get up to speed. I really meant it in a good way when I said this reminds me of Neuromancer – there’s some wonderful extrapolation from what present-day LLMs can do to how they’d behave in a world where they’ve become sentient, and there’s some wonderfully clever thinking and speculation about what society might become when our virtual worlds become ever more of our focus. What’s even better, Chaffin gives us little hints of how we got from 2025 to 2139, with pieces of future history referenced throughout, but also from characters running into older technology which reveals the stepping stones Chaffin imagines humanity might use to get to the future where the book happens. This is great stuff. I wouldn’t say that all of it seemed 100% likely or workable to me, but that doesn’t matter. It was great fun to read about, and it was brilliantly deep and complex. This is the first novel I’ve read about future AI that seems to tie in closely to our current cloud computing and newly-LLM-filled lives, which I found really cool – just like Gibson took a limited Internet and imagined much of what cyberspace would come to be.
The pace of the book gets faster and faster as Mason caroms from clue to clue and plan to plan, facing sinister interference, threats, and calamity. There’s a kind of sci-fi action movie feel to the plot, with much of the last third of the book being a big chase climax spanning the real world and many cyberspace locations. That’s good for keeping up excitement, but it does mean some story elements get dropped or minimized as we go, with major characters sometimes just disappearing from the story with no further explanation or description, and occasionally with big plot elements not fully explained or resolved, at least to my reading.
That focus on pace and plot means the things we were learning about the characters become less relevant, and their actions become more and more constrained by outside forces. I liked the structure of the big plot showdown at the end – the parties involved, some big twists, the threats – but the execution left me a little dissatisfied, with an ambiguity to the ending and epilogue, and with a lack of clarity (at least to me) as to what actually happened in the world or even to the major characters. Despite a lot of scenery chewing from a couple of major villains, the ending felt a little rushed, and it seemed to me that Mason lacked agency for much of the climax and conclusion, merely bouncing like a pinball between various plot targets, aided or hindered by forces he couldn’t control. In the midst of that, though, there was a wonderful scene where he’s multitasking brilliantly – using his factotum to do research, talking an ally through a difficult task, and also trying to accomplish a task on his own, all while the world is falling apart, and it’s just a great image of a distracted, tech-heavy future, all condensed into a single scene.
VAGUE SEMI-SPOILERY BITS HERE: At the end, despite enjoying the book and having a lot of fun with it, I had a lot of questions, like: what is Sam becoming? what happened to Andrew? where does all this leave the AIs? does Mason get to his oft-stated goal of a normal life with abundant expensive coffee? what happens to Miranda, and what was she playing at? did Meredith get what was coming to her? Answering these would have made the book longer and more boring, for sure, so it makes sense that Chaffin wrapped things up. But I felt like I’d missed out on some promises made, and that some interesting and important threads were not tied off. The rush at the end also meant that Mason’s arc wasn’t resolved, at least for me. At times during the story, he felt more like a mouthy gumshoe archetype than a real person, and the ending, which didn’t really share where he’d arrived at or who he had become, didn’t help that feeling. A lot of the other characters seem to start to go on personal journeys, too, but again, many of these don’t really get very far, and we never see where they might lead. I also 100% did not understand what the epilogue was getting at, which may be a me problem.
Summation
If you’re up for a vivid near-future sci-fi story with a strong and capable cyberpunk feel, Accidental Intelligence delivers beautifully. For me, the worldbuilding was the strongest part, and the wide-ranging plot and colorful characters do a great job of painting a luminous, seedy picture of where we might be headed as a species.